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i proszę o ocenę designu, flash'a (szczególnie menu). Strona nie jest bogata w tresc ale niedlugo bedzie. Sprawdzalem ja na IE i Firefox ale jak znajdziesz jakis blad to powiedz... bardzo dziekuje...
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1. Wielki minus bo niemieckie 
a tak na serio:
2. Ten czerwony to długo musiałeś szukać...
3. Zupełnie nie potrzebnie we flashu zrobione menu (lewe boczne) :/
4. Górne menu za to - dobry pomysł
5. Wielki minus ponad 40 błędów!!!!! http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...pl%2F_odziez%2F
(w strict ponad 60)
6. Strona zupełnie odstraszająca!!!! Wygląda jak hackers nest albo co...
Proponowane zmiany:
LŻEJSZY KOLOR!! Ten czerwony jest zabójczy.
Inne tło. Białe nawet mogłoby pasować
górne menu zostawić
boczne zmienić zdecydowanie...
logo wygląda bardziej jak neon... nie logo.
osobiście jakbym był klientem.. szybko bym uciekł (szczególnie niemickim)
no straaaaaszne błędy :/
nawet DOCtype nie ma !
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Do tego dochodzi jeszcze błąd w javascripcie!
a tak na serio:
2. Ten czerwony to długo musiałeś szukać...
3. Zupełnie nie potrzebnie we flashu zrobione menu (lewe boczne) :/
4. Górne menu za to - dobry pomysł
5. Wielki minus ponad 40 błędów!!!!! http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...pl%2F_odziez%2F
(w strict ponad 60)
6. Strona zupełnie odstraszająca!!!! Wygląda jak hackers nest albo co...
Proponowane zmiany:
LŻEJSZY KOLOR!! Ten czerwony jest zabójczy.
Inne tło. Białe nawet mogłoby pasować
górne menu zostawić
boczne zmienić zdecydowanie...
logo wygląda bardziej jak neon... nie logo.
osobiście jakbym był klientem.. szybko bym uciekł (szczególnie niemickim)
no straaaaaszne błędy :/
nawet DOCtype nie ma !
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Do tego dochodzi jeszcze błąd w javascripcie!
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Cytat
Too many errors. Not all warnings/errors were shown.
Ocena 1/10
Do niczego.
Kolorystyka leży. To wściekłe bordo zaatakowało mnie z monitora a ja tylko chciałem zobaczyć. Kwestia kodu, już wspomniana, leży jeszcze bardziej.
No i jeszcze coś o czym nie wspomniano.
Co za poroniony pomysł z ta nawigacją we flashu. Nic nie usprawiedliwia jej tutaj.
Lepsze efekty osiągniesz za pomocą CSS niż te które tu pokazałeś, a i dostępność się zwiększy.
Ogólnie 1 / 10
Kolorystyka leży. To wściekłe bordo zaatakowało mnie z monitora a ja tylko chciałem zobaczyć. Kwestia kodu, już wspomniana, leży jeszcze bardziej.
No i jeszcze coś o czym nie wspomniano.
Co za poroniony pomysł z ta nawigacją we flashu. Nic nie usprawiedliwia jej tutaj.
Lepsze efekty osiągniesz za pomocą CSS niż te które tu pokazałeś, a i dostępność się zwiększy.
Ogólnie 1 / 10
Żałosne.
Style niewyodrębnione do zewnętrznego pliku, budowa tabelkowa, brak alternatywnego logo nieflash, brak jakiejkolwiek semantyczności, w środku kodu strony nagle <html><head><style>, menu we flash.
Można używać ujemnej skali oceny?
Style niewyodrębnione do zewnętrznego pliku, budowa tabelkowa, brak alternatywnego logo nieflash, brak jakiejkolwiek semantyczności, w środku kodu strony nagle <html><head><style>, menu we flash.
Można używać ujemnej skali oceny?
Cytat(Zajec @ 2006-05-07 11:20:58)
menu we flash.
Podpisuje się pod tym, nie lubię tego. A nawet jeśli to powinna być jakaś alternatywa dla osób, które wyłączają go.
No cóż ja mogę mówić innego, strona jest totalnie nieudana, zmienił bym ten kolor, na mniej 'oczojebny'. Zdjęcia... słyszałeś o miniaturach? Kod strony tragiczny. Generalnie nie podoba mi się wogóle, musisz jeszcze nad tym popracować
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Na Twoim miejscy zacząłbym od nowa... nie ma co drążyć...
Tak, zrób jeszcze raz, a najlepiej spróbuj to dokładnie przemyśleć przed, i poczytać coś niecoś.
nie winetu nie!!
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To jest wersja lo-fi głównej zawartości. Aby zobaczyć pełną wersję z większą zawartością, obrazkami i formatowaniem proszę kliknij tutaj.